Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusJun-22-2014 1:41 AMHopefullly this time it will post and go easy on me this is my first creative writing atttempt at Godzilla and i got lazy because this is the 5TH TIME I AM WRITING THIS BECUASE IT DIDNT WANT TO POST
Location: USS Saratoga
-The Kraken is continuing its rampage, locations affected are South Africa, certain parts of Europe, and more. It has no relation to nuclear radiation- says a soldier
-We need a team to take this thing down, since Godzilla wont- says Stenz
- The Kraken is a sea beast too, it is fast enough to stay away from Godzilla- says Serizawa
- Since we are relocating the Brody Family aboard the Saratoga, we might as well put Ford in this team alongside his father- says Stenz
- You cant be serious- says Graham
- It is time he learns the truth about his father- says Serizawa
(25 hours later)
- I know you want me in this "team" and you want me safe, but my wife is pregnant and I have a feeling there is another reason you brought me here- says Ford
Serizawa explains - Your father is alive, this might be hard to believe but his Medical ID in the Saratoga was accidentaly swapped with a man named Joshua Oliviera, he had radioactive contamination in his blood, we only realized this when we took a blood sample from your father, he wa...
(Ford leaves the roomn with mixed emotions and Graham follows his out)
-We will arrange for him to meet you tomorrow- says Graham
Ford turns around and nods, before heading back to his room
(Ok this is kinda my backstory and i got pretty lazy and pissed because my topic wont close, so i left out some detail this time)
(I just want your opinions on some stuff so, when should this be set 2015, '16, '17, '18 you get the point)
(where should the final battle take place, not San Fran or New York, try to think out the box, and it should be somehwere coastal)
(I will make Godzilla's atomic breath a little more beam-like to show it is stronger now becuase he healed from San Frans battle)
(In my opinion when Cranston said we didnt see the bag close on Joe, I looked more closely when I watched Godzilla again, and he looked a little different, like a stunt double or something)
Post your opinions and please try to answer all my questions ;)
GG
ModeratorGiganJun-22-2014 8:14 AMAwesome! This has alot of potential. And thats what i like to see with rough drafts, Keep this story up!
Good grief.
Godzilla316
MemberAnguirusJun-22-2014 8:30 AMGORILLAGODZILLA77897, thanks for the feedback, please answer my questions that I asked in the topic, that would be much appreciated
MonsterMovieguy
MemberMothra LarvaeJun-22-2014 12:13 PM2017-18
"By the promise of these things, brutes have risen to power. But they lie! They do not fulfill that promise. They never will! Dictators free themselves but they enslave the people."